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From ghoulies and ghosties And long-legged beasties And things that go bump in the night, Good Lord, deliver us!Traditional Scottish PrayerFeedback is fuel for the creative spirit - your comments are...
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Romantic AND spooky! Well, more like romantic and sad. Poor guy. Excellent use of details to make the story come alive. It's a haunting story, in that it has stayed with me all afternoon. I'd love to...
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Thanks, Khazie - I'm glad to know that the story stayed with you for a while, that is high praise indeed. I would like to post the long version after I finish with my upcoming move to Kentucky; it has...
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I agree with Khazie - so romantic, so sad. The castle has such a forlorn feeling to it, the perfect setting for such a tale. I love the way you mislead the reader into thinking that the woman is the...
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Thanks so much! I'm glad the feel of the castle came through - I had the very devil of a time parring this down from the vicinity of 1000 words, and was afraid some of the feel of it would suffer. And...
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I loved your story! You said so much in so little words and it was all so sad and haunting.If there is a longer version then I cannot wait to read it! Really brilliant!
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Many thanks for your kind comments on the story, Briar. There is a longer version in bits and pieces on the editing room floor - and I plan to put it back together some day soon. The story took a...
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